How to write a short sentence

Updated: Apr 12

Sentence 1

A car is a four-wheel machine with a gasoline-, diesel-, or battery-powered engine, sometimes a gasoline- and battery-powered engine, also known as a hybrid vehicle, that can transport at least two people, and usually five people or more, to a chosen destination on roads and, by doing so, reduce transit time to the least possible amount of time compared with walking.

Sentence 2

A car, which has four wheels and an engine, carries passengers on roads.

Is your marketing information as clear as sentence 2?